Flirting, a photo from Baja California Sur, Baja

Photographer's Note

These two teens were waiting stage left to dance in the town square during a performance put on by the local high school. It's leaning a bit to the left in the doorway and the window, I actually rotated left to correct the eave and the street not realizing I had skewed the doorway until post post.

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Ebbe (9625) 2004-01-07 11:24

What a nice picture and so perfectly 2/3-composed. The flower pot is a question, in can be seen as a distraction but it also adds life so I think you did right to keep it.

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Mireille (2604) 2004-01-07 12:32

Belle composition, le sol est un peu surexposé. Pour ma part, j'aurais coupé le haut juste au dessus de la frise. J'aime bien l'attitude des deux personnes. Jolie lumière également. Bravo !

seiliv (317) 2004-01-07 12:45

Like it Dennis, no doubt about that. Great composition and color. It is not a lot of details, and I think that makes this one a good one.

The only thing that might disturb is the objects in the middle at the left side ("...rmes" ) and maybe the one at the right... but that to the right you have cut of at the half, which I think is a good choice.

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scalerman (26900) 2004-01-07 13:03

great framing and subjects. this picture tells a story.

richtersl (3546) 2004-01-07 13:12

Nice balance and color. Well done.

vkbhaskar (181) 2004-01-07 14:22

Nice frame, but the uncoplete words on the left and uncomplete shield on the right are not good for the picture.
You should have moved in a bit closer to eliminate those and just get the door.

RandomCameraGuy (3071) 2004-01-07 17:54

Very nice. The only reason this doesn't get the Big Smile is because you should get in closer (even tighter than seiliv's WS) so that only the natural square frame of the door, window, and the grey line on top of the door are included (I would then clone out the plant).

cheers,

alex

clodreno (0) 2004-01-08 4:26