Cloud over water, a photo from Northumberland, England

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North view from Blyth Harbour with Blyth Power Station in the distance.

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sailingjim (201) 2004-03-06 11:40

Nice tones, nice subject matter, too much information in the photo. Step forward and try to use the ramp to help lead the eye into your center of attention, the clouds. I don't think the foreground adds anything to the photo and I find it somewhat distracting, though not badly so.

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merpb (2001) 2004-03-06 14:03

Great B&W treatment although the scene is a little busy and lacking a focal point.
It's a shot of 3 3rds and the bottom 3rd is not as inspiring as the top 2.
Nice work though

mortijo (12828) 2004-03-06 15:08

The b&w is a very good idea. The clouds are very nice too. Personnally I'd choose another angle, leaving out the foreground and placing myself more towards the rigt and foreward, takeing the ramp as a guide into the picture.