a day on the heath, a photo from London, England

::: a day on the heath by demur_1 (17)

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Photographer's Note

A view from Hampstead Heath with the city just visible in the distance. The greenery helps frame the shot and the young couple in the centre left of frame add a speck of interest, the grey clouds round out the picture.

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manss0fl (327) 2005-11-02 20:01

The overall effect is just too dark Ross. There is little detail to be seen in the greenery and the sky is grey and un-interesting. I think if the image was lighter, with more colour, an interesting sky and a larger focal point (say a couple at one end of the near path), then it would be a good composition. Don't take this too harshly, it's meant as constructive feedback. Cheers.