Experiment 1, a photo from Leicestershire, England

Photographer's Note

Hi! I'm new to this photography lark and am trying to learn how to take good photos. It was an unusually bright day in a gloomy January and I noticed this pretty ornament on my windowsill. Took the picture but it wasn't as good as I hoped so made a few changes to enhance it. I have posted the original image as a workshop so you'll be able to see the difference. ANY IDEAS/ADVICE/COMMENTS WOULD BE MUCH APPRECIATED!

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mugush (2104) 2006-02-10 15:46

First of all Welcome to Trekearth!!
nice work..atleast good try,,
tell you if you want to upload Artwork kind of photos then please do upload these kind of stuff on www.treklens.com(sister site of trekearth)..
i like your object, next time try to concentrate on you composition I would have to put this ornament into frame,in your case you missed it,,right side of photo telling it..
keep trying and you will learn,,if you really wann learn then it is the best palform to learn,
Best wishes
love
mugush

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Karitsiotis (845) 2006-02-10 17:47

Hi Trish and welcome to TE!Great B&W photo for your first entry post..Well done..Just try to make it a bit more clear next time..Like your workshop..
Friendly,
Nikos

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RADEEH (2802) 2006-02-10 21:12

Nice one in B/w , but i think it better suits in treklens, Like to see more of your captures of people and places, With a warm welcome to TE

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rkarun (209) 2006-02-12 17:17

Photographing is fun and i hope you are enjoying it.
Keep trying different shots to improve your skills,take more pictures and share with us,between im also a newbie like you.

I'll try to give my comments to all your photos.

Regards
Arun