Making cigars, a photo from La Altagracia, East

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Local experts making cigars in a small cigar factory owned by Germans.

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andante (7092) 2007-02-26 13:04

Hello, Armand. I think that the image would be stronger if your composition would have included the hands. As it is, the composition creates a triangle with the eyes, the cigar and the hands... but the hands (the focus of attention) are missing. Other than that I like the colors and pattern formed by the two rollers.

Best regards,
Enrique