Photographer's Note
Part three of my Baseball Everywhere Series in Cuba.
Children and teens gather during sunset to play baseball on the outskirts of Trinidad.
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horatiuTT
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(4570) 2008-04-29 10:14
I like this photo with an interesting low pov,altough I don't
quite like the pink in photos and I would have preferred to see
the complete head of the boy from the right.The scene is very
interesting and some great textures there.I like it.
Regards,
Horatiu
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faubry
(35447) 2008-04-30 2:29
Bonsoir Mark, i like this photo with triangle composition, pitty for head of the right boy...
soon
francine
Prisley
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(1485) 2008-05-01 0:42
Hey Mark,
Now I get it...you're a triangle maniac!!! that's your interpretation of the rule of third I was trying to understand in your former post....everytime you see a subject you build a triangle to shoot it! hehehehe now i got the manual i can keep on looking it your work ....kidding ;o)
Anyway, on that one the colors again are very interesting, made of blue and pink. There's a lot details.
It's good that you've timed the shot when the boy was preparing to hit the "baseball ball", and that you've got it right in between the bars. Though, I'm quite disturb by the heqd cut off of the boy in the uper right. Either you got in full into the frame or you cut it totally. But there, I've got a feeling of hesitation, something's wrong. I understand you wanted to have the boy on the left in full, and that's an excellent point in your photograph....hum...that must ahve been tricky...
Cheers,
Pris.
