try again, a photo from La Habana, West

Photographer's Note

I met these two saleswoman on the street in Old Havana. It's obvious to me that their clothes are traditional but don't know what they mean. And maybe the women make money from photography? Do not know. I shot them from a long distance.

Since Porteplume critique my last post: "It’s a bit of a pity you couldn’t frame the picture lower at the bottom and tighter at the right side because it creates some unbalance in the composition" - I found the right picture for him (-:

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dedee (3275) 2020-06-03 5:44

The colours against the stone wall are very effective.You would very much like to know what they are talking about. Good composition.

Porteplume (4036) 2020-06-03 7:48

Bonjour Yuval,

Yes! It is a lot better. More space around them and they are both placed a little out the center, almost perfect composition! :)
Now you will get a bright green smiley from me!

Amicalement,
Viviane

* Oh... And Porteplume is not a “he” but a “she” ;)

Mesut09 (1095) 2020-06-03 22:47

Probably they were defying the order

The woman on the ride with puro is saying '' resist the all rules and break them''

:)