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elena
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 199 W: 57 N: 256]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
(1054) 2004-05-04 23:09
Welcome to TE! what a great pic to start here!
i wish the man on the right would NOT be there, it seems the camera focused on him, leaving the boys unfocused!! i would be tempted to cut the right part and get rid of him completely.
otherwise, this image is a ray of sunshine among the others! that vibrant orange caught my attention immediately! many of them were looking at you seriously, but just one with a contagious laugh illuminates the whole picture!
which camera did you use?
philip_coggan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 522 W: 19 N: 1]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif){kind=small}
(11) 2004-05-04 23:55
Beautiful colours and a lovely subject (all the litle monks). I'd try to avoid that head in lower right corner, and maybe get in a little closer so as to fill the screen more with the colour of the robes.
airin
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(172) 2004-05-05 3:56
Welcome on TE, Bob. Nice subject, the only one thing I would cut is the man in the right lower corner. Nevertheless, nice start here, keep posting.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Bob Bradford (pdwarf1) (17)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2004-04-10
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/125 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2004-05-04 22:52
Discussions
- To elena: Camera Type (1)
by pdwarf1, last updated 2004-05-07 08:17
