Rejang Girl #8, a photo from Bali, Nusa Tenggara

Photographer's Note

During the rest time of sacred dance, I tried to talk with her, but whatever I said, she kept silence and continued to see me.

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maglex (1980) 2008-10-07 6:40

Hi Takero, an interestingly different portrait, I like this composition showing us the flowers beside the girl telling us that this must be some kind of cultural event. Good DoF. Thanks for sharing, Alex

scalerman (26900) 2008-10-07 10:02

Takero: this is a fine, delicate composition - everything here is just right including the mild softness of the image. You could consider posting at full 800 pixel width for more impact and detail. congrats, c

everlasting (20024) 2008-10-07 10:15

A fine composition, subtle and delicate with a fine bokeh. A little larger with a frame would blow the page away.

aymeric_baque (145) 2008-10-15 7:01

Hi Takero,

Great portrait ! this girl may not be smiling but her eyes are expressing a lot of feelings : reflexion, sadness, dreams...a mixture of all of them.
Good composition too with this colourful artwork on the right side.
TFS
Cheers
Aymeric

faubry (35447) 2008-11-12 1:24

wonderful portrait, and i like the bocked, pitty its too small...
francine