Pit Onthel, a photo from Yogyakarta, Java

Photographer's Note

"Pit onthel" The Javanese called for old bicycle, is still exist as a traditional transportation in their daily life.

[location: Imogiri, Bantul]

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Alternative cycling activities in Jogja: Cycling along the Historic Ditch-Selokan Mataram (www.yogyes.com)

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Disabled_A (0) 2011-09-19 14:48

Hi Sulistyo,

a very good capture of the moment! Excellent contrast between the clear foreground and hazy background. The trees look almost like shadows and create a bit mystic atmosphere. Very interesting!

concerning the composition, I would suggest cropping a little of the right side as this dark pillar on the right doesn't play any important role here and looks a bit disturbing...

If the right side is cropped, then the highest tree in the BG and the cyclist with balance each other perfectly.
See my variant in the Workshop :)

best wishes,
Elena

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divail (8334) 2011-09-19 17:25

Bonsoir Sulistyo,
Cette photo est vraiment superbe. On dirait que le cycliste et le second vélo sont devant un décor peint à l'arrière. C'est le brouillard qui crée cet effet. Seul petit point qui accroche, les fils électriques, mais la photo est belle de toute façon.

Diane

areque (267) 2011-09-24 1:53

Bonjour Sulistyo,

kabute emang mantep yo ditambah cabang2 pohon. Cuma kabel listrik agak mengganggu. Mungkin tiang listrik di sebelah kanan kalo dicrop kayaknya lebih bagus lagi...

Photo Information

Copyright: Sulistyo Anggoro (sta) (170)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-08-28
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Transportation
Camera: Canon EOS Kiss Digital X, Canon EF 75-300 mm f/4-5.6 III USM, Hoya UV Filter
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-09-19 11:09