Photographer's Note
It was at a carneval ceremony in East Jawa when I took this picture of those two elementary school students wearing traditional Indonesian fancy costumes !
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sebcz
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(2345) 2006-11-04 6:42
Hi Daniel!
A joyful portrait photo. Good focus of that smiling girl. You dared to crop the other girl, for me it works fine.
Regards,
Seb
ndb1958
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(9289) 2006-11-04 7:06
Hi Daniel,
na, da freut sich ja jemand und bringt dir ihr Lachen von ganzem Herzen entgegen.
Schöne Portraitaufnahme. Guten Moment erwischt.
Ciao, Nino
zips
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(1958) 2006-11-04 10:40
A great shot in what I might presumke was crowded conditions. Great capture of a fun time.
It is so much more interesting to see the womans face on the left as just a half. I love those myself.
Great colors and DOF.
Great Job.
Aloha, JB
pablominto
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(53746) 2006-11-04 13:05
Hello Daniel,
You capture a lot of happiness in this fine image!
Colourful, and they love the fiestas whatever reason...
Bold framing, works with me as it adds dynamics!
Greetings,
Pablo -
yanm
(1485) 2006-11-05 23:54
I thought the lady on the back was trying to be funny :D Just a bit dislike for the girl on the front. Not for the croping but the focus of it. I like it more unfocus. just a little.
ayansadhu
(1502) 2007-12-07 8:22
Great expressions shot at the right moment...
Nice portrait shot
Good framing
Vibrant colors
