Photographer's Note
I was just about to take a snap of this atmospheric corridor behind Pandey Ghat in Varanasi - when a kid ran in front of me and down the lane laughing. Just as well really because the original shot without him is rubbish.
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Praetzer
(209) 2005-01-03 15:33
If you put the boy central, the eye expects him to be in focus.
Also I would have preferred a tighter crop leaving only the bue door visible.
As it stands the background behind the boy seems to have some interesting detail and is sharp; so I probably would have taken another picture without the boy.
Nice try however.
PS: I did 10's of these before getting 1 right
so don't take my comment as rude. I know how difficult it is.
tashi-wangmo
(30) 2005-03-03 8:27
I like this "blurry" boy...it gives movement to your shot!i feel like i could follow him...and also that the frame door is not perfectly scare!i find it good!
Photo Information
- Copyright: luke ashton (swansfeet) (41)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2004-12-04
- Categories: Daily Life
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2005-01-02 4:40