Photographer's Note
this shot was taken in Kalimpong.
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dhurjati
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(2709) 2007-06-15 5:52
Hi Binita,
This is a nice capture.Still I think there are few areas to be carefully looked into.Firstly,the snap requires sharpening and I think the colour saturation can also be improved upon.The POV is nice but the sky is overexposed and requires a strong cropping from the top.Also there is some spot at the top right which you might have overlooked.Overall it is a nice view and with more sharpness and careful light management I feel it will be more impressive.
Greetings,
Dhurjati
bhuniatrekearth
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(764) 2007-06-21 0:17
Dear Binita,
A nice landscape. Only a little application of Photography grammar can dramatically improve the presentation.
Check the WS.
Carry on your posting.
Best wishes.
Dr. J.
Silvio1953
(221493) 2007-06-22 5:59
Hi Binita, wonderful landscape with splendid POV, great composition, very well done, ciao Silvio
pinakie_slg
(861) 2007-06-22 8:04
chobita dekhei bujhechilam je to kalimpong hotei hobe, karon orokom landscape edike ar kothao nei.
valo hoyeche, akash er wash effect ta khub valo legeche, er theke valo edike hoy na.
etadin kothay chilen? welcome back.
