Photographer's Note
The airport of Sao Vicente is a tiny place...It's really easy to engage most of the passengers into a short talk and then move to the photography-activity...
that unknown fellow, though, did not say a word to me, he just posed, and he did it eagerly...
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zmey
(7335) 2008-03-31 8:00
hello jerzy
a masterly managed portrait shot... he does not seem to be posing at all, rather staring at you attentively. i love the contrasts and the texture of his skin(character) you are showing here.
warm regards and TFS
kristaps
horatiuTT
(4570) 2008-03-31 8:08
What a wonderful light,a true portrait great face expression
and that light that comes in to the eyes is wonderful.I just wonder if it's not a little overexposed the right side of the face.In Polonaise's style no doubt.
Horatiu
batalay
(41259) 2008-03-31 8:12
Hello Jerzy,
A very good portrait of the "unknown passenger." People are indeed willing to allow photos after you engage them in small banter. Warm regards,
Bulent
Booz
(14347) 2008-03-31 22:58
hmm - wyglada jakby jakas blenda rozjasnila mu twarz... ;) - wczorajsza uroda model zrobila na mnie wieksze wrazenie ;))
Pozdrawiam
Tomek
MarcT
(20964) 2008-04-01 0:33
Hi Jerzy,
That's a superb portrait with an excellent use of lights and shades. The hard contrasts are working well. The direct eye contact is also well chosen.
Cheers
Marc
ninaL
(21348) 2008-04-01 1:26
Jurku, tak nie do konca widzi mi sie to zdjecie...
Czlowiek sympatyczny...
Usmiech jest...
No ale brakuje mu albo zajecia (czlowiek w akcji) albo jakiejs chararakterystycznosci...
Moze jestem bardziej przyzwyczajona do roznokolorowych twarzy, zyjac tutaj...
No a poza tym widzisz braki techniczne...chociaz chyba probowales klajstrowac przepalenia, to i tak one sa...Slonce powinno tutaj padac na TYL jego glowy, tam, gdzie my nie mozemy zobaczyc...Z pewnoscia nie mogles z nim sie dogadac, azeby go "ustawic" w swietle, jak trzeba...No ale w takim razie, na Twoim miejscu, nie wstawialabym...Wiem, ze szkoda, ale przecie Ty osiagnales na TE taki wysoki poziom, zanim ja Cie tutaj znalazlam i zanim zaczelam w ogole cos robic...Gdybys byl poczatkujacym Teowiczem, z kompaktowym aparatem, to bym bila bravo. A tak, czegos mi brak...
Ja na technice za bardzo sie nie znam, ale f 6.3 i 1/100 to nie sa wartosci dopasowane do takiej slonecznej sytuacji, moim skromnym zdaniem. Przeslona powinna byc bardziej zamknieta, a czas naswietlenia o wiele szybszy...
Pozdrawiam. Grazyna.
riclopes
(35577) 2008-04-03 3:05
This one is much better, J. Sure that the excellent presentation much help a lot. Too much pp? I don't know but I like it a lot and he's close enough to make it a great portrait. We can feel he's face talking...
Have fun with the lessons, hope you don't use that green hair in them :)
ric
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jerzy Bucki (bantonbuju)
(51815) - Genre: People
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2008-03-16
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/6.3, 1/100 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): Caboverdianos * Cape-Verdean People [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2008-03-31 7:37









