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Photographer's Note
Scene from a Beninese village north of Ketou. The mud-baked walls and corrugated steel roofs are typical.
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Olof
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(135) 2007-03-25 20:05
I think the photo would have had more impact if you had gotten closer to your subject. Include more of the woman in the photo, with the door frame around her, and the dirt wall leading out to the left. Perhaps shot straight on instead of at an angle...
Just a few thoughts to ponder...
peixotox
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(100) 2007-03-25 20:14
Good photo, in my opinion you could have focused more on teh door and the two windows to give more intensity. Good job congratulations
Ben2Africa (12) 2007-04-05 14:35
Nice Caleb! I really like this one. It's a good representation of Ketou...the REAL Ketou.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Caleb Ficner (kwekwekan)
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(1078) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-12-30
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Panasonic Lumix FX-01
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Travelogue: Benin, Un-forgotten
- Date Submitted: 2007-03-25 19:37
