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Furachan 2007-11-06 3:51
Jacek - the idea, the IDEA is really very good - how you wanted to make these silhouetted human shapes blend nto the "kanji" on the wall as it were. And at thumbnail stage it looks retty damn good bu here's the thing - you needed to:
a) Turn these assersby into true 100% black silhouette (you did not)
b) You had to make them sharper too
So I can only give you a half dose of GREEN while applausing the oncept behind it. Keep em coming...
Francis
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Hey Francis. I really don't care about the green, as nice as the colour is. I much more appreciate your honest and very useful critique. This is what this site really needs more of. Thank you very much. I will deffinitely take your advice into notice.
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Let me try a workshop to accentuate the silhouette thing, okay (I'm not uploading these days so I might as welll...)
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