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Stairway To Heaven Robpulp
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2006-12-12 7:20] [ +] A smidge over-processed perhaps? |
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Untitled Aidin-Baftechi (73)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2006-12-12 7:19] Interesting. Compelling. New. Great stuff! |
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Ultimate Driving Machine jigz (58)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2006-12-12 7:18] [ +] 3 Series = ultimate? Ha! The owner will not appreciate your sarcasm for sure. |
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California Warning mdchachi
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adam
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 434 W: 38 N: 32]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (860) [ 2005-11-28 3:34] [ +] Hehe, this is funny after reading your note. These signs are plastered all over my apartment complex. :) I assume it is because of the asbestos. One place is on my ceiling. Apparently popcorn ceilings from buildings in the seventies and earlier are almost assured to be made from asbestos.
Modern parking garages also apparently use asbestos even today for insulation. |
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Light and Shadow ElSato
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adam
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 434 W: 38 N: 32]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (860) [ 2005-09-18 3:20] [ 2] [ +] The rainbow of colors and bold signs really capture the essence of a carnival perfectly. The shadows are spooky! What are they actually? How can they be? To me it looks like the devil himself telling a little boy something, but what? Instructions to do something? A warning? |
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Sangenya Higashi baboo_mcfoo
(100)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-07-25 9:47] Damn, I gotta try more angles in my work. Inspirational. |
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Osaka Landmark baboo_mcfoo
(100)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-07-25 9:45] Its been a long time since I saw something on TE that made me want to log and and comment. This is just great; the subject, the composition and the overall feel are just perfect for my taste.
My only comment is that it appears to be slightly oversharp. Perhaps I've just been looking at toycamera gomi for so long? Sugoi! |
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seven abby (93)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-04-02 6:57] Great subject. Just wish for a little more Japanese-ness? |
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running in street carolynanna
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-03-21 7:32] Unmistakably brilliant. The wet pavement, the bus, the underground sign, the man in the hat all compliment the main subjects. |
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Hainuzuka omelet (30)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-03-13 3:33] - [ workshop] [ compare] Everything from the crosswalk, the wires, the Yamazaki Bread sign, to the aparto really makes this a good photograph. Great location!
Scanning from the negative, or cleaning up the scan from this print would make it even better (it has a few grubby spots). Very good!
すばらしいいです。 ありがとう。 |
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stop sign abby (93)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-03-13 3:27] A classic LC-A photograph. Great subject, well framed. A little more contrast perhaps to boost that LC-A feel?
このLC-Aの写真とてもいいです。 もっと おねがいします。。。LC-Aとトイカメラの写真がすきです! |
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country church #2 sikor102
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-02-18 19:33] Wow. Another great subject very well observed. Though a classic, your presentation is good, and the day has added a nice gothic feel to the work.
I cannot help to imagine though, what this would look like on film. A photograph taken with an old film camera would really lift this scene. |
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Winter in forest #2 sikor102
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-02-18 19:31] Excellent eye, on a good subject. I find the digital-ness detracts a little. Soft focus and film would be just great here! |
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Along the Alley yohaneseko
(109)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2005-01-31 6:57] Timeless work. Even the modern scooters do not detract. The frame does a little though.
Some minor clones on the white spots, and a bit more black would really lift it. |
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Totoros in dark~~~ rkhk (35)
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adam
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 434 W: 38 N: 32]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (860) [ 2004-11-23 4:07] Wow, I bought that doll (gray one in the middle) in Tokyo last month! |
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Clouds from the Train barronfujimoto (77)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2004-10-24 5:03] This is certainly worth the rescanning effort. The subject is well positioned, and the sky looks like it has great potential.
I do not know however if the high contrast would work better than popping some of the grays in the sky.
With the rescan too it would be nice to see some of the Tri-X grain coming through as well? Heck, all these options! I love film, and I love this photograph. |
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Empty Train barronfujimoto (77)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2004-10-24 5:00] Strange feel to this. I love it. Some more blur through the windows perhaps might increase the impact, but otherwise well spotted and presented. Love those colors. |
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Lockup! cgrindahl
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adam
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 434 W: 38 N: 32]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (860) [ 2004-10-18 2:39] [ +] The funny thing is, I think it's possible to open that lock with a pen cap! See this thread for more info. |
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Wonthaggi coal mine dwids (4)
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2004-10-15 8:13] Nice location. Good framing - perhaps better with just one head frame right? Still, the overall feel is good. Something interesting to look at! |
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Old? Bos
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Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (581) [ 2004-10-15 8:08] I think this technique would work really well with a better subject. The feel, tint, and tones are really nice. But, the subject is a little flat. Still, this is nice though. |
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