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In the garden II Pablo25
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robertspotswood
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 34 N: 17]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (84) [ 2009-07-13 14:05] - [ workshop] [ compare] [ +] Using the two trees/bushes in the foreground to frame the picture was a good idea.
However, the overall picture is kind of dark, giving the picture a dreary feeling. This is surprising considering that it was a cloudy day, which is my favorite weather for outdoors picture taking. A contrast mask at the very least would improve this picture. |
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Lahore festival ptime26
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robertspotswood
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 34 N: 17]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (84) [ 2009-07-13 13:42] You did an excellent job of capturing the image, especially considering it was night. Keeping the colors reflected in the water on the left was a good choice too. There is a little bluriness on the back on carriage, but that was probably due to the fact the boat was moving. A faster shutter speed would have helped, but again, this was night, so I'm impressed by how good a job you did getting the horses sharp.
Were it me, I would have cropped a little off the right side though. The lights on the right side don't have anywhere near the visual impact those on the left side do, so losing them is no big loss. The cropping would, however, shift the rule of thirds intersection point to between the two horses, rather than have it on the right most horse's face. When I look at the picture, the horses are what draw my eye, so having a focus point there helps visually. |
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every day light: 9,30 a.m. polpo56
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robertspotswood
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 34 N: 17]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (84) [ 2008-11-15 8:22] [ +] Nice play of light on shadow. Bright tree contrasts nicely with the dark background. I like how the tree is off-center. Good choice.
It took me a moment of looking at it to realize that the blue dots in the background aren't noise but rocks. Do they really sparkle like that or is it just a trick of the lense? |
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Golden Fall iren_k
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robertspotswood
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 34 N: 17]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (84) [ 2008-11-11 19:19] Good angle. I think you made an excellent decision to center the path in the picture, as opposed to using the rule of thirds. It's a little dark for my tastes, but still an excellent picture. |
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sooooo spicy! Jeppo
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robertspotswood
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 34 N: 17]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (84) [ 2008-01-21 3:13] The colors are what attract the eye to this picture. However, only one the spices is in focus. A smaller aperture (larger f number) would have given a better depth of field. |
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End of forest Graal
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robertspotswood
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 34 N: 17]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (84) [ 2008-01-21 2:54] Nice post processing. Gives it a dream-like quality. Can you post the steps to colorize?
I really like the angle you chose too.
It is interesting to note that this is not a natural forest. Trees don't grow in such neat rows naturally. At most you might get a few trees in a row, but not this many trees and rows. How this forest came to be would have made a good addition to the note. |
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Curve of Heaven Lee10 (118)
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robertspotswood
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 34 N: 17]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (84) [ 2007-09-17 16:16] Great spot for the picture. The curve of the mountains guides the eye through the picture. Everything seems to be in focus, which is another plus. |
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Red Sea siislam
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robertspotswood
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 34 N: 17]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (84) [ 2007-09-17 16:15] Hmmm...my monitor must be out of adjustment. The sea looks quite blue to me :).
It looks like it could be a great shot, but it's just so out of focus. Other than that, the horizon is level. Good. It's not in the middle. Also good. |
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Betel for All BobTrips
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-04-23 17:25] I really like the texture and repetion in this. Maybe a little dark, but something really interesting about it. :) |
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Stones and flowers near Lestans lestans
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-04-23 17:22] [ +] I like the lines and colours in this. What a nice landscape you have there! |
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Christ Church Cathedral maphoto
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-04-23 17:19] That is my favourite time of day for sillouette photos. Lovely how the steeple reaches for the open sky. :) |
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Port Credit Marina mumek
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-04-23 17:18] That texture of the clouds is awesome. Beauty! |
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Home cookin' bertolucci
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-04-23 17:17] [ +] I love those colours! And now I am homesick... But not too much - spring has come. :) |
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The big train joergen115
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-04-23 17:15] This pops out of the screen - a boy's favourite photo. :) |
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Window through Time danbachmann
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-03-09 17:11] Beauty! The lighting and colours here bring that sense of wonder that you have put into your good note. One's eyes wander too. :) |
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church of St.Elias mumek
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-03-09 17:08] I so like this building - thanks for sharing it with everyone! :) Brampton is so multi-cultural! |
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Bovespa –A bolsa do Brasil bertolucci
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-03-03 15:44] [ +] You do take photos of the most... uninteresting things, and make them interesting! haha Hope you are well. |
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L'Accalmie maphoto
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-03-03 15:42] Very cool! Taken with those dark clouds and heavy ice in the morning light was a great idea. "Like a painting" |
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Gracious Hosts stevesaba
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-03-03 14:20] Beautiful colours - she seems very indifferent towards her photographer. |
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The swing ! achakladar
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digi-mom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 668 W: 63 N: 323]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (1064) [ 2007-03-03 13:36] [ +] I like that black and white - timeless! |
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