Critiques

barzan (19) 2006-02-28 7:05

wish the people weren't down ther, amazing view, may be a bigger f would have added more dept. overall, nice shot.

barzan (19) 2006-02-28 7:02

Nice shot. I wish you could show the hight, I can't think of a way, specially at that time of the day.

barzan (19) 2006-02-26 9:16

having too much of sky, make it impossible to show the hight, otherwise it's an amazing picture.

barzan (19) 2006-02-26 9:09

The pole on the right is extra. also I would have increased the F number to 10, and took an under exposed picture (say with shutter seed of 1/1500) so that the water and clouds look a bit darker, and sky more blue.

barzan (19) 2006-02-26 9:03

It would be a perfect picture if the sky was a bit more blue. I suspect it was a bright day, well can't say much cause can't find your shutter speed and F.

barzan (19) 2006-02-26 8:56

if your feeling when you took the picture was as you described in your comments, I would have taken the picture a different way. I would go farther to the left, using a zoom lense and closer to the ground. having a row of the stones going inward and in the background the doorway which can be seen at the right and of the wall. I like the color on the stone, if it was less cloudy then you could have more blue sky, and the mixture of the green, blue and white would have made a deeper nostalgic impact. Alas that we don't get the perfect weather.

barzan (19) 2006-02-26 8:43

I would have kept the lense more horizontal, with a large F, such that having a bit of sky between the mountains, and some of the trees on the slope of the mountain in the background. This way you could have a nice view of the rice terraces, with additional perspective and dept.

barzan (19) 2005-06-14 17:17

The pattern on the surface, the trace, two boats at the oposite edges and the space between them, all have made it a photo that induces feelings and emotions. It is interesting that you see more yellow than blue, I am not sure if this is because of the processing, camera setting, or just simply the time of the day and lack of sky. Great job.

barzan (19) 2005-02-13 2:09

Nice picture, I wish the wireline and that tower weren't there. I would have zoom out and add just a little more of earth.

barzan (19) 2005-02-11 6:24

Robert, Not sure what was the main idea. If the architecture was in mind I would have taken this picture in day light, with more depth. If it was a practice for long exposure, then it is a good one. However, I feel a greenish hue, which I think is due to white balancing. Also I would have framed the picture in a way to capture part of the ground as well. That would bring proportion and sense of reference to the picture.