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felix Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 0] (52)
Actually the shutter speed is 1/100s, but I cannot choose in the drop-down.
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felix Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 0] (52)
Edited by:BobTrips Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 357 N: 74] (1847)
Welcome Felix. You've got objects on both the right and left of the picture that don't (in my opinion) add to the picture and are slightly out of focus.

Let me suggest cropping out the edges and a bit of the bottom to concentrate on the real subject matter of the picture. You're left with the unusual palm tree trunks and the viewer is left wondering what those kids are so interested in.