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devimeuxbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5240 W: 226 N: 9994] (48659)
Sur la plage je m'évade.
Je suis face à la scène.
Je suis de ceux qui ne marchent pas sur l'eau.
Qui ne savent pas voler, et qui restent sur la berge.
Alors je marche comme une ombre.
Je tourne dans ma tête.
Je scrute l'horizon.
Sur la plage je m'évade.

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On the beach I escape.
I am vis-a-vis with the scene.
I am those which do not walk on water.
Who cannot fly, and who remain on the bank.
Then I walk like a shade.
I turn in my head.
I scan the horizon.
On the beach I escape.

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devimeuxbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5240 W: 226 N: 9994] (48659)
Arc soft Photostudio
Edited by:Tobias__Ortmann Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 52 N: 445] (1991)

He betrand I really like your picture how I wrote you in the critique
but I mad this picture darker so that we cant se some details of the persons
I think so the sun becomes more important with its colours
also anothter frame at this colours
hope you find it usefull
Best regards Toba