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Yet another glare (6)
ascotti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 49] (254)
Yet another one of the children at the library, i really find the black and white captures the rythm in their life aswell as their spirited selves, yet as photos normally do bring it all to still life to tell a tale no one will really know

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ascotti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 49] (254)
linux
Edited by:dot (2)

love the cynical contrast between emotions and trademarks, individual reality and social fiction.

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ascotti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 49] (254)
crop and edit
Edited by:david Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 424 W: 284 N: 640] (3962)

i thought about my first workshop, and i think that the framing is not good enough ... so i wanted to tighten the frame to focus on the boy's beautiful face.

1. crop
2. brighten +50
3. contrast +10
4. gradient mask (to remove some of the glare from his forehead)
5. black frame
6. resize

i think this is better than my first one.

the boy's face is the subject ... so cropping it tightly would be a good way to keep the focus on the subject.

enjoy

david

ps ... sorry for doing two workshops! :)

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ascotti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 49] (254)
crop and colour
Edited by:david Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 424 W: 284 N: 640] (3962)

my traditional crop and colour.

i've brightened this photo considerably, as well as adding some contrast. a thick black frame makes the photograph appear more clean.

of course, everyone has their own opinion ... but i think this is an improvement.

enjoy

david

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ascotti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 49] (254)
Photoshot
Edited by:rafelito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 691 W: 131 N: 611] (3629)

Fix color
Crop
Frame