Re-posted. Cropped a little off of each side, reduced saturation slightly on building and grass, reduced noise in sky using Neat Image, and added a thin frame.
This old schoolhouse is located on on the west side of U.S. route 71 in rural Clay County and southwest of the town of Spencer, Iowa. Surprisingly, there are still several old one and two-room schoolhouses in existence throughout the state of Iowa. Unfortunately, vandals have spray painted this one but in a strange sort of way I sort of like it from a photographer's point of view. This particular school is at the very top of a hill and is an impressive sight while driving along U.S. 71 from either direction.
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savask (1891) 2006-10-25 16:37
Nice compo. The school looks spooked or something...
Telo (307) 2006-10-25 16:41
Hi. very good framing. I like the minimal amount of grass on the bottom. also the POV is very smart and the theme, along with the note are very interesting. great shot, in my opinion.
Malyshev (2522) 2006-10-25 17:17
Hi,Gregory! Great composition! Wonderful colours and magic atmosphere! Regards! Yuri.
gmg (4202) 2006-10-25 17:30
Nice compo and POV. Good use of polarising filter! Probably still a bit too much noise. You could try Noise Ninja
drm (486) 2006-10-25 17:33
Fantastic composition and POV, Greg! I wonder if the lower part of the photo could be darkened a bit, perhaps with a black-to-transparent gradient on a layer. In a hurry, so can't do a ws. But I love it the way it is anyway. Well done.
Isab (865) 2006-10-25 18:35
Wow! Le sujet est intéressant, le cadrage est parfait et le ciel est fabuleux.
J'adore cette photo.
rewshearer (682) 2006-10-25 18:57
Magnificent composition and great colours, excellent use of the polarizer to get that deep saturation.
If I may, I have a small grumble about the frame, I don't think the rust-coloured border works - but a great shot in my view
vapours (8264) 2006-10-25 20:30
Pretty cool shot here Gregory. The wide amount of sky you've shown here really makes this little building look like one lonely place.
zenskat (656) 2006-10-25 20:38
Very nice image Greg, good idea to crop like this o give the vereticals ,more prominence.jez
vagabondtravels (6507) 2006-10-25 22:18
Great colors and comp. Nice repost!
Very well done
Sorry :) dry
dkeus31 (27735) 2006-10-26 6:22
Nice composition torwards the sky with the strong diagonal made by the cloud
pady (4800) 2006-10-26 9:21
Very good cropping. You got the essential and this is very expressive. Nice cloud over the school. It's dynamic.
darrasin (2860) 2006-10-26 19:46
Hi Greg! I think this crop really emphasizes that bizarre cloud line for a dramatic effect. Nice work!
- Copyright: Gregory Wagner (fotoguy22) (4726)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 1997-10-00
- Categories: Ruins
- Camera: Minolta X-700, Minolta 28mm, Fuji 200 color, Circular polarising filter
- Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2006-10-25 16:30
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