Serrated Edge Photo

Photographer’s Note

Elim Dune. Repost as per suggestions to overcome the DOF problem. Image cropped and rotated. Any better?

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Nina (4613) 2003-06-17 15:37

Lots better Bruce, full marks!

AdrianW (2243) 2003-06-17 16:12

Yup, definitely an improvement. I love the range of contrast and the feel of texture in this shot :-D

greg (2835) 2003-06-17 18:08

yes, you made a good job of that - great result!

nmess (2289) 2003-06-17 18:41

I think this is much better... well done.

dovi (1068) 2003-06-18 0:01

The color tones are great but I'm amazed by natures ability to form these perfect similar curves into the send.

Aegean (2567) 2003-06-18 2:45

Wonderful composition and amazing texture and lighting...Very well done!

amanda (226) 2003-06-18 18:02

Don't know what the original was like, but find this image striking. Love the textures, contrast & colour.

ronners (10) 2003-06-18 23:00

This is very nice. I would be tempted to clone out that stone though, and clean up some of the white spots. Going for simplicity is often a great idea, and you've proved why with this one.

As far as DOF is concerned, this is a case of a subtle difference between soft and out of focus. I don't mind softness in this case, but the shallow DOF leaves me wanting a bit more detail.

Amos (670) 2003-07-06 8:21