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Photographer’s Note

Handheld photo showing a cut of reality on the metro, two women, one reading to the other? Uncut, slightly increased contrast.
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Please see Edwin's excellent WS, which certainly exceeds my Photoshop skills...

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WoodPigeon (457) 2004-06-05 13:11

Not bad picture of 'daily life'. Some intereting things always happen on the metro of Paris for sure...!

If I could give some 'advice' for improvement, maybe you could crop the two sides a bit more. Also, the picture looks a bit out of focus (? - unclear...).

The poster makes an interesting background :)

snuggleaphagus (4140) 2004-06-05 13:21

I really like this photo because it isn't what it seems to be. At first I thought from the thumbnail that it was two women in a country setting but then it isn't. I like their postures too. Maybe cropping a little on the left and right.

Edwin (2039) 2004-06-05 16:21

Nice picture Edvard, I like this mindtrick with the background, and how you placed these two women in the centre. Nice sense of interaction too, intimid daily life shot. Well seen.

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summer89 (5414) 2004-06-21 17:50

I like this composition, Edvard.

The background give someting special.

Well done