Streets of Rayen Photo

Photographer’s Note

In the streets of Rayen, small iranian town where not so often foreigners are being seen.

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arindam_thokder (3946) 2006-04-25 21:10

Hello Antoni,

I love the shadow and light in the picture. I would like to see a bit more of the girl though...She might stand outside the door...But this is street photography anyway...you could not arrange everything and take picture ;)

Arindam

greg (2835) 2006-04-26 6:52

Very nice - I don't agree with Arindam - the girl is absolutely perfect where she is. But I'm not convinced that the general framing is the best - those curved rooftops are what gives the image a special atmosphere, and it's a pity that they're clipped and crowded out. The alternative would be to remove the top-left edge altogether - the composition would be better, but the scene more ordinary...

rbcy1974 (20746) 2006-04-26 7:33

Hello Antoni,
I do like the view over the village and the play of shadows, but I like the others would like to see a closer picture of the girl.
Regards
Daniel

eleparc (24059) 2006-04-26 10:55

pity you cropped the top of the roofs and kept the bottom part which is dark and useless for the sake of the photo IMO.. ;-(

otherwise, it is always interesting to see some unvisited places;-)