Another Brick In The Wall Photo

Photographer’s Note

This is the second submission from my trip to the Great Wall in China.

While walking along the wall with friends, I noticed the shadows that were cast along the wall. So I took this shot, focusing on the shadows.

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andante (7092) 2006-02-04 11:03

From Pink Floyd's the Wall: Empty Spaces:

What shall we use
To fill the empty spaces
Where we used to talk?
How shall I fill
The final places?
How should I complete the wall

In this case the question is how to maintain it. At this point the wall is one of the wonders of the world.

David, the composition leads the eyes to empty space on the right of the image. Id try a tighter crop. TFS. E

anew (580) 2006-02-04 11:17

Really nice pov.

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skomy (124) 2006-02-05 6:31

David,
Nice choice for the B/W effect.
Good thing that u mentioned the shadows part in the note...makes me know what ur concentrating on in the pic.

Its a very nice picture allover.
welldone.
Sherif

triptych2003 (1406) 2006-06-26 22:48

B&W were aninteresting choice for this shot. i think it worked well, it helps illuminate the shadows a little better. a tighter crop would help a little too.. some empty space on the right