Photographer’s Note
On my way when back home. Have a nice day. JYB
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(17950) 2008-03-02 21:29
Lovely b/w composition which looks as lost and forlorn as the sujec itself. The composition has lv=ovely tones and grains and has a perfect balance
BBroekema (12) 2008-03-02 23:30
Excellent b&w photo with a nice composition. The long shadow of the house completes the picture.
Regards, Bram
peterhanington (2) 2008-03-05 18:28
Hi JYB...
Great subject matter, and more so in B&W, but I think there is a problem with perspective. With the image centred on the front corner of the building, the roof line and front and side wals beecome somewhat two dimensional. If conditions are still good, try going back to the scene and taking another shot from a little further back and a bit to the right.
Peter
Photo Information
- Copyright: J Y Bissonnette (JYB) (603)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2008-02-28
- Categories: Architecture
- Camera: Sony DSC R1, Carl Zeiss Vario-Sonnar T* 24-120
- Exposure: f/8, 1/320 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2008-03-02 21:23
