By the riverside Photo

Photographer’s Note

People untangling the nets by the Kaladan River in Sittwe.

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piozac (2058) 2004-03-23 12:15

Fajna kompozycyjnie fota pani Joanno. Trochę nieostra (przynajmniej u mnie), ale bardzo mi się podoba.
Pozdrawiam!!

spence (1679) 2004-03-23 16:52

I really like this a lot though it could perhaps do with greater depth of field, sharper focus and a slight tilt. I love the absorption of the people in their tasks and the wonderful contrasting layers of colour. Lots of interest but not too busy. Well done.

lukasfoto (3078) 2004-03-24 4:29

bardzo fajna kompozycja zdjecia! oby tak dalej!

manny (21378) 2004-03-24 8:09

GREAT SHOT! So many lines and the colors are wonderful! Is it a bit tilted? I don't really care. You have an amazing composition here.

maciekda (19599) 2004-03-24 9:34

wonderful picture, great composition with the main in the foreground and the whole scene divided into 3 parts - gray, green, blue, wonderful. just tilted a bit and a little too soft, but these are minor flaws, very nice!

Nina (4613) 2004-03-25 19:12

I like this one a lot Joanna. I was tempted to try my hand on a little workshop, hope you don't mind.

[workshop] [compare] +

robbertjan (2906) 2004-03-26 9:12

Hi Joanna. Nice picture with a lot of dept. I like the green tones here. The man with the net is a good detail. And it a very quit picture. Very well done!

nwoehnl (120) 2004-03-26 9:46

This is a very nicely composed shot, Joanna! Multiple horizontal layers with the person untangling the net in front, the kids in the center, the boats on the water behind, and the thin line of sky. The colors are nicely saturated in this very absorbing scene. A bit of grain, but that's what Nina addressed in her WS. Very well captured, thanks for sharing!