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sam (897) 2002-11-06 14:53

There is a lot to look at in this photo. However, I sense that this scene was captured between moments. Everyone is scattered around the yard, but I can't see how they're interacting with each other. If they were all laughing at a common joke or listening intently to a speaker, I would feel the connection more. But everyone's looking off in a different direction without clear purpose. Because this is such a sparse setting (dry grass, chain-link fence, bring wall...), I really need emotion from the people to make this image work for me. I feel that this misses the "decisive moment".

roshangar (1493) 2004-02-16 20:08

I like the compostion and very well done!
you really captuerd their mood1