Green and Red Photo

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Luko (13902) 2003-10-16 17:03

Well well, Bob, I suspect from the title you went for a color abstraction...on green and red (not very difficult to find that out...)

I'd say it doesn't work for me with that framing : you'd have to abstract it more, say with cropping much of the right side window in order to get rid of any realistic details (specially pointing the hinges here) that would surface too much over an essentially conceptual image.

Not a very characteristic image from your style here...

chrischris (859) 2003-11-02 13:13

I like both photographic quality and framing in this shot.

Photographic qualities : very good exposure (no over saturation in the high lights, perhaps just a bit dark in the right up corner). A lot of details in the leaves and the shutters. There's no (visible) barrel distorsion despite the use of a wide angle, I would like to see much such thing in those kinds of shots (captures of doors and windows...).

Framing : good equilibrum between the window and the leaves, naturally great and nice contrast (red and green colors), I like the ratio of white parts in this image too. Angle used here is well seen too.

Perhaps could you give us some informations in photographer's note about this work. To be sure this one works for me, I like it. A pleasant composition.