Photographer’s Note
Enfant dédier aux femmes à longs cous
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Darren
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(6819) 2005-01-17 2:42
She is a cute girl and makes for an interesting subject, but I think your composition could be improved here. She is just sitting right in the middle of the frame, and there is someone encroaching into the frame from the left. I think this would work better if you had composed in such a way so as to have the second person either more visible in the shot, or not visible at all. Having your subject not so centered would work as well. Nice colors and the exposure seems right on.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Jean Perret (galileolebon) (79)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2004-11-16
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2005-01-17 1:33
Viewed: 1019
Points: 1
