Love at the seaside Photo

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Two lovers by the seaside on a September afternoon.

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Hauke (2) 2005-01-02 5:22

Hi Edite, nice idea presenting that couple in love by using the pier as leading line. But there are too much interferring informations in the background (other peoples, the apartement houses). The result is a flickering eye before getting the main subjects acc. to the title given. Would have been a more significant shot if you'd tried another perspective or would have used other lenses (e.g. by the usage of telelenses and open aperture focus on the couple only and excluding the background by blur). Sometimes, less is more.

SylFondacci (4085) 2005-01-03 15:26