I must confess to you that I like this photo so much. It is a flawless capture plus the B&W tone.
Since you have obviously been recorded successfully on the hat and the shirt texture, I would like to increase these Chinese elements that made the picture, by trying a stronger crop, under my... Vietnamese view.
I just removed the bars for this workshop. I kinda liked them because they frame the picture but many of you thought it is irritating so I posted this workshop.