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Mexico
Title: Just before the storm
Just before the storm (4)
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)

Enzo63 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 47 W: 13 N: 9] (457) [2008-09-24 21:40:36]
Tuileries befor storm
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Yemen
Title: ~mystery~Contax RTS II
~mystery~ (56) *
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)
crop
crop
velocista Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 232 W: 79 N: 124] (844) [2008-03-04 10:56:56] [3]
hi,

i croped from all sides to focus the eyes and added a frame

take care

pedro almeida
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Bahamas
Title: Knee deepYashica FXD
Knee deep (66) *
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)
+saturation +brightness +contrast
+saturation +brightness +contrast
mcassio Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 52 W: 12 N: 33] (188) [2007-01-17 12:23:50] [1]
+saturation +brightness +contrast
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Mali
Title: Finding peace in chaosContax RTS II
Finding peace in chaos (42)
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)
Another crop
Another crop
aralda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 74 N: 344] (2881) [2005-11-26 13:04:13] [2]
I cropped a little from the bottom so as to zooming in more on the woman. Didn't touch anything else.

I see this makes the kid bundle look heavier, too. I like it, but I also like the way it appears in your original version. What do you think?
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Mali
Title: Driven by curiosity
Driven by curiosity (10)
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)

Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600) [2005-07-16 13:41:57]
Look! There are running towards you now... ;-)
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Niger
Title: Living with styleContax RTS II
Living with style (12) *
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)

entrelec Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 13 N: 577] (8336) [2005-06-27 03:28:14] [4]
Just equilibrate dark colors and clear colors.
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Niger
Title: Dressed up and smilin'Contax RTS II
Dressed up and smilin' (48) *
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)

entrelec Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 13 N: 577] (8336) [2005-06-23 17:03:28] [4]
I know you like the dress, but the portrait seems to me more equilibrated like this.
Simple point of view.
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Niger
Title: HiddenContax RTS II
Hidden (20)
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)
Auto level
Auto level
bnallama Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 370 W: 40 N: 504] (3731) [2005-06-19 03:23:32] [2]
JUst a autolevel in PI. Bala
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Mali
Title: "Lady in red..."Contax RTS II
"Lady in red..." (26)
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)
crop
crop
nerve Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 844 W: 82 N: 692] (10106) [2005-06-03 08:36:58]
cropped the bottom a bit,
played with the levels and made the mountains (which i like) a bit more obvious..
personal taste of course,
greetings.
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Mali
Title: Finding peace in chaosContax RTS II
Finding peace in chaos (42)
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600)
cropping and adding a frame
cropping and adding a frame
Paker Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 252] (2600) [2005-05-31 09:51:57]
So i cropped to as gringofil suggested as I did agree that whatever happens to the right in the original composition can be distracting. But now that I look at the end result I think this woman is shown OUT OF CONTEXT. If I did not know I would not guess that she is in the busy market - and that my intention to start with.
I still like it but I am not convinced this is a better version.
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