CLODO (28622) 2014-07-30 7:09
First of all, welcome on TE.
congratulations to dare posting pictures on internet at 12 yeras old.
The idea is correct with a stong crop, but the realisation is not good, because you focus on the tail which is sharp whereas you should get the eyes very sharp.
2 smileys for welcoming you!
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-30 6:56
Congratulation for the decisive moment, the shapness and the contrasted colors, but the framing is not correct: the skater seems to be ready to crash in the right border of the picture, whereas you have plenty of space behind him! The position of the boy should be at 1/3 of the left side of the picture, with space in front of him
dekanski (2194) 2014-07-30 3:28
kao da sam tamo, i mislim da joj c/b ba stoji. A ako ikada stignem do Melburna - potraiću Brunetti! Znam ta znači imati mesto sa dobrom italijanskom kafom kada si daleko od ovih krajeva!
Usput - koliko su ti platili za ovakvu sjajnu reklamu?
Bar nekoliko kafa gratis?
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-30 3:06
what I like here is the low POV and the contrast between the small human silhouette and the BIG waterfall. What could be improved: the blueish general color of the image and try to decrease the house dimensions, this is not the subject of the shot.
I propose you my vision in a WS
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-30 2:48
ta photo est trop grise et il n'y a aucun relief, d'autre part, la silhouette noire est tip top au centre, donc pas attirante photographiquement parlant.
La règle du tiers s'applique bien ici si tu mets cet homme près de la rambarde en bas à droite, et si on ajoute un peu de contraste en ayant des valeurs blanches, ton image et son message transmis deviennent plus lisibles et attractifs: c'est ce que je te propose dans un WS.
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-30 2:35
generally, I don't like partial desaturation, but here it works well. Good framing for this cutie among the prying people, even if I would have cloned the bottom to remove the child head at the center.
Where is daddy? Question mark!
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-30 1:52
good to see how our grand parents were living without the modern equipments. The shutter speed was not enough quick to freeze the movement and so part of the hay is blurred, and that's great. The only thing which disturbs me is the man's cloth, not in accordance with the mood at that time.
have a lovely day
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-29 23:34
Bonjour John, as we say in France!
The general diagonal composition reinforces the feeling of dynamism, movement yet given by the scene itself and also the white smoke coming from the planes. Good idea to have orange painted aircraft, they are eye catching against the sky.
have a lovely day
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-29 23:25
I like the framing with a perspective of the wheat on the table leading our eye on the working woman, the dark BG is enhancing the warm colors. I would have cropped the right part (advert for Coca Cola) which is not in accordance with the mood of the picture.
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-29 23:21
Kak Dyewa Kasia!
She is really pleased to pose for you, having yet some gifts to show you: a feeble smile, the way to tilt her head and the position of the hands holding the door frame. The blurred BG color is in accordance with the door frame and her pull over hues.*Have a lovely day
CLODO (28622) 2014-07-29 23:15
I have seen such a scene in India; some parts of the image are overexposed (no matter in the ground under the bike), and the garage owner is half hidden by a pole. You should have stepped at right to have him totally and exposed for the light hues, and then reduce the contrast. Nevertheless, I like the mood of your street photography.
have anice day