three swimmers - Rangamati Photo

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Rangamati Lake in Bangladesh

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yquem46 (7982) 2008-11-23 12:16

I like the 3 levels of the compo. Nice to have this blue kid alone in the foreground
regards
Patrick

Leonie (8647) 2008-11-23 12:24

Hi Maciej,
Nice picture on 3 levels. The green on the sides adds a nice colour touch! I like it a lot!

Cheers, Léonie

everlasting (10898) 2008-11-23 12:51

Well composed Maciej with great depth. Good to see you posting again i thought we had lost you.

robiuk (10763) 2008-11-23 14:22

Good quality, simple, well composed - like your idea of using triangles to play with one's perception and sense of perspective and to break the apparent stillness within the frame.
Good work, Maciej.
Robi

rbcy1974 (20742) 2008-11-24 1:16

Hello Maciej
Interesting scene. I like the way the kids are represented in different planes.
Regards
Daniel

eversmile (6133) 2008-11-24 8:57

Hi Maciej,

The situation lets me interrogative here: what's happening? Is it just a game? Is there any reason to worry, as the three young swimmers are quite far? The composition is without any doubt fitting very well the situation anyway, with all the children looking towards the lake, scrutinizing the water with intensity. You could have chosen the "decisive moment" category for this one!
Regards
Marine

siislam (290) 2008-11-30 10:45