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grux (135) 2008-10-23 21:31
Hello,
Welcome on TE
The composition of your photo is interesting, but shadows disturb me a little bit and, as for, me, don't bring something.
See in workshop, the small modification I've brought
Regards
Jean-Yves
Mrfish33
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(56) 2008-10-24 2:01
Simple, subtle photo. The color and composition are superb. It should be cropped to get rid of the dock at the top and the tree and top right(like in the worshop). The color in the original is better than the workshop though.
holmertz
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(9564) 2008-10-24 2:36
Hello Florence,
A good observation, an attractive constellations of boats, fine colours. I agree with the others that it should have been more tightly cropped.
Best wishes,
Gert
Discussions
- To Mrfish33: Thanks (1)
by florencesnn, last updated 10-28 23:15 - To grux: Yellow boats (1)
by florencesnn, last updated 10-28 23:10 - To Mrfish33: modified colors (1)
by grux, last updated 10-24 10:02
