Photographer’s Note
We had some free days and did a short trip to Santos, a city by the sea and about only 60 Km far from São Paulo. The first day was a little bit cloudy, as seen in this picture. Since then, it rained cats and dogs and we decided to come back earlier. It hasn't rained in São Paulo for more than one month and, of course, it comes when you go to the beach... It was a pity for all of you too, because I wanted to take lots of pictures of this part of brazilian coast, maybe we could have gone to some beaches at the north coast of São Paulo that are really very beautiful, but we didn't because the weather was terrible.
Well, I bought a ND filter, Sony model VR-R52K, and I don't know exactly what is it for. I used it in this shot, and it looks ok for me. Is it useful for this kind of picture? Or what? Except for the size reduction for posting, I haven't edited this file.
Re-post note: Hey! It's interesting how software can edit photos! I couldn't imagine that all this were possible. That's something I've learned here in TE, I must say, thanks Adrian.
I used two layers, as if they were graduated filters, one grey to clear the botton and another blue to warm the top (in the divide function, that 'inverts' - or whatever it does - the colors, so that the blue acts as if a glass yellow/orange filter). I am using The Gimp, in a Linux environment.
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AdrianW
(2243) 2003-07-23 14:14
You've done a good job, I like the new crop, and you've worked wonders with TheGimp! My only significant criticism is that you haven't managed to straighten out the horizon ;-)
greg
(2835) 2003-07-23 18:09
I'm very impressed with what you've got out of this shot - the composition's better too. I might also try reducing the colour saturation at the bottom, since it's a little flat after so much stretching, and adding an all-over golden colour, taken from the top.
htremblay
(1664) 2003-07-23 22:32
Très beau travail, belle photographie. Bien rendue. Bravo
Very beautiful work, beautiful photography. Returned well. Bravo
Luko
(13896) 2003-07-25 13:15
You've done wonderful, it's amazing the difference here between the 2 shots!
Now that's a perfectly balanced shot that yet keep the natural blue tones of the end of the day.
It was a pity that such beach action and nice compo was barely apparent in your first try. excellent job!
Nominated for best improved shot awards on TE.
nmess
(2289) 2003-07-29 21:09
Beautiful work Agusto. You have taken an average photo and produced a stunning image. Adrian is right about the horizon, but I still give a big smiley for the effort.
goerhal
(781) 2003-11-22 6:55
The soft light is fantastic here! Your ND filter is useful. However I would prefer this shot horizontally, now you have cropped the childrens feet instead of some of the sky. It´s OK this way if you lower your camera a little bit.
Bogdan
(1641) 2005-01-25 18:36
those kids with the ball make it all, for me. It is great of you to have included such a wide scenery..i would have been tented by a close-up. Great stuff !!
sandratiriba (0) 2006-04-18 8:30 [Comment]
Photo Information
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Copyright: Augusto TRM (Guto)
(1738) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-07-09
- Categories: Daily Life, Nature
- Camera: Sony Mavica CD-400, Carl Zeiss 2/7-21
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/160 seconds
- Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
- Travelogue: Raining at the beach 2003
- Date Submitted: 2003-07-23 12:29
- Favorites: 1 [view]








