Photographer’s Note
How I wish I took the photographs of the beautiful surroundings :(
This is a photograph of the fireworks at 14th July at the Eiffel tower. This day as you might know is celebrated as the Bastile Day.
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Natasa-David
(462) 2008-09-27 6:18 [Comment]
John_R (16) 2008-09-29 17:58
Hi Sayantan,
It's a nice touch in a fireworks shot to get the silhouetted crowd watching the display. It's more effective, however, if there are more realistic outlines of people. The fireworks bursts you've shown have a few wiggles in them. That indicates that either something was not steady on the tripod, or someone bumped the camera. The bursts are low, and there's quite a bit of black space. I might have cropped the shot lower to fill out the frame better. I noticed that you used a relatively large aperture opening. A smaller one (larger f number) would probably have been more effective. That would have enabled you to use a longer shutter speed, which would have caught more action. I know that it's difficult when you're in position to take some fireworks photos, but, in the future, if there's any way that you could improve your vantage point, you should try to do that.
John
Photo Information
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Copyright: Sayantan Mukherjee (sayantan20023)
(164) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-07-14
- Categories: Decisive Moment
- Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), 18-55 Canon II EF-S f/3.5-5.5
- Exposure: f/5.0, 1 seconds
- Details: Tripod: Yes
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2008-09-27 5:32
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