Photographer’s Note
A dive into the Ganga River
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dArpAn
(490) 2008-09-07 22:35
Welcome Ritwick,
I loved ur first image. But you've a lot to improve upon-
- Size if the pic is too small. See others' pics and then post a bigger size photograph.
- Your note reveals almost nothing. I wouldn't have mattered to me even if you wrote 'A dive into the Jamuna River'. Just kidding, but a note should be informative and meaningful enough to create interest in the viewer. Like here, you could possibly mention where you clicked it or why you clicked it.
- Though I liked the composition, but you could include other elements in the pic. As of now, it looks a bit dull. Fortunately, I've a recent pic by Angshu for ur ref- http://www.trekearth.com/viewphotos.php?l=3&p=950167. View it and see how a pic can be made more interesting by inclusion of more elements.
So, enough of preaching, you would be irritated by now :)
Best of luck,
Darpan
Photo Information
- Copyright: Ritwick Pal (photoclix) (3)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-08-31
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/4, 1/250 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2008-09-07 21:49
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- To papon: Thanks (1)
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