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TO MY DREAM LAND..
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Copyright: JEAN PAUL (japiey) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1611 W: 315 N: 2211] (8079)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-31
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): MY SUNSETS [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-09 10:39
Viewed: 350
Points: 76
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
ISLAND OF LOVE ..

"Streams the twilight in far lands
Sultry day in me, I sweat my smiles
Sailing in the sea to my dream land
Stretching my vision in the horizon..
Secrets of the journey to my heart
Sealed in hopes of evening silence
Strong is it's passion,I lay my soul
Safe in her shades of evergreen love..
Solemn moods fade of my life now
Seeks a life, a heaven in real
Sail the ship of love to horizon
Shed away silence, blow your horn
Saying 'I love you, my dear lady'.."

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SHOT AT THANGASSERI, KOLLAM, MY LAND.
SILENCE IS LOVE IN THE EYE OF EVE..
~ jp


“We meet this evening, not in sorrow, but in gladness of heart”
~ Abraham Lincoln
(February 12, 1809 – April 15, 1865) was the sixteenth President of the United States, serving from March 4, 1861 until his assassination. As an outspoken opponent of the expansion of slavery in the United States, Lincoln won the Republican Party nomination in 1860 and was elected president later that year. During his term, he helped preserve the United States by leading the defeat of the secessionist Confederate States of America in the American Civil War. He introduced measures that resulted in the abolition of slavery, issuing his Emancipation Proclamation in 1863 and promoting the passage of the Thirteenth Amendment to the Constitution in 1865.

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My dear friend JP,
Very peaceful atmosphere in this beautiful image of the setting sun with a fishermen boat!
the feel of the image that goes with the poem side by side always
well done
from NZ, Tony

Love doesn't need words,two lovers can stay together side by side,silent,and their silence says more.. lost the language,love is silence...and yes, love is silence.
I wish to know that dreamy destination...
See, there in boat are 2 people,and we can imagine that they are lovers,even if maybe reality is different,your note makes us dream too
All the best
Isa

Hello My Friendly Poet!

You have locked together this wonderfully romantic and atmospheric scene with the perfect poem! What more could I do but be there to experience it!
Even the colour tones are poetic!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hi Jean.

This is a very well captured picture. You have a great composition here with the boat and the setting sun. Also I really like the atmosphere in this picture!

Very well done and thanks for sharing!

Blair

the sun turned near to pink through your camera, and for the other parts of the sky and the water it provided interesting tones, a peaceful mood
regards
jo

This is a lovely sunset with excellent colours and a nice POV. And, a great note too.
Antonio

Hi Jean Paul
A lovely picture, my friend.Perfect to people that are loving.We can imagine good things just seeing this scene. Beautiful poem.
Abraços
Maria

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1149 W: 22 N: 410] (6088)
  • [2008-05-09 18:35]

Very unique colors and a very pretty scene. A peaceful feeling to this picture. I like it! TFS

Hello JP. well anchored sunset and the lonely boat. The space and glow is stunning. well done and best regards. Jusni

hi jean,
beautiful shot. tfs.
manoj

again very romantic and poetic scene from you.. it looks very simple but has so many good feelings.. if you may feel ofcourse.. and your way of presentation it makes it more creative i think... the place of the sun and the boat with a couple tell everything in this atmosphere..
en iyi dileklerimle,
ReLa

The image is like a dream. Soft and saturated. and so well composed with a sprawling view. Great work yet again

Ciao JP,
great sunset light and very good capture of the little boat.
Very good colors and beautiful framing.
Anna

Hello my friend!
Amazing atmosphere! Beautiful image and note! Wonderful colors and lights!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

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  • leo61 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3360 W: 303 N: 6406] (27420)
  • [2008-05-10 5:10]

Hi Jean Paul!
A dreamy atmosphere indeed.I like the little waves and the perfect capture of the sun.Nice sunsettones,too.
Regardss,Leo

Dear JP!
a simple, minimalistic view! A misty landscape, a golden picture. Bravo!
Livia

so simple yet so beautiful jean paul... looks like a journey to the sun... well they have a long way to go, but it's worth it:)... so romantic...

cheers

korkut

Dear Jean,
igen:) Island of love..
The photo with this poem together is so beautiful!
i'm very impressed'
Peaceful, romantic atmosphere which makes me dream...sailing in the sea to my dream land :)
Nanni,
Lin..

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  • stego Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3200 W: 556 N: 4020] (12352)
  • [2008-05-10 7:16]

Namaste Jean Paul,
As wonderful as it is simple and 'empty'. Full of emotions... Inspiring... Like I stated more than once, you are a poet not only because of your poems with words, but because of your visual poems.
Regards, José.

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  • vincz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2899 W: 87 N: 4820] (16692)
  • [2008-05-10 7:45]

Such a peacful atmosphere, such interesting tones. i love the tiny boat there with the 2 persons in it. Very nice.

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  • Gustaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2071 W: 642 N: 145] (16584)
  • [2008-05-10 9:42]

Hi, my friend!
It is very romantic photo. I like your conception, good warm colours and very nice view. Well done.
Marek

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 966 W: 108 N: 1340] (4739)
  • [2008-05-10 10:10]

hi JP

I like the warm sun and colorful sunset mood and your pov with the boat. Good shot

tfs, bill

Hello Jean Paul,
You send my senses in the vast of a deep dream...It is amazing that there are still dreamlands in our world...
Thanks for this beautiful images dear friend...

nice weekend,
Thomas

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8440 W: 887 N: 10916] (52869)
  • [2008-05-11 2:46]

Hi JEAN PAUL

Good composition using the rule of thirds, with both the sun & boat nicely positioned on the left. Superbly warm sunset colors. Tfs!

Hi, Poet,
May this boat under this peculiar light take you to where you've been dreaming.
An outstanding yet simple composition and the right colour management to bring the daydreaming mood.
TFS
Valerka:)

Hi dear Jean,
another poetic photo that pulls our soul inside in its atmosphere,amazing !
like the result,wonderful tonalities that I love !
nicely done,
Best Wishes
M

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  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2763 W: 575 N: 2830] (34063)
  • [2008-05-11 23:02]

Poetry, nostalgy, love, pain.
All in your simple photo. Thus it is not a simple photo.

Regards my dear friend.

Ciao Jean Paul,
look at your photo and read the notes is as have a journey in the love. seems to live a dream. compliments .
Giorgio

hello my friend,
Your photos are sensitive and delicate and your notes absolutely useful.The photo shows
the soul of the photogapher,avo my friend
you did again he best
Thanks for your photos
Greetings from GREECE
hAVE a nice week end
Costantino

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  • pelin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 137 W: 119 N: 280] (1294)
  • [2008-05-12 12:02]

Hello friend! Thanks for the comment. :-)
I see your island of love is in a 'moody' atmosphere.
As always beautiful poem, good note.
Thank you for that!

gteat shot with marvelous color tones, thanks for sharing.

What an excellent atmosphere you got here Jean. The three elements complements each other very well. Excellent shot.

Albert

Hi JP
Amazing tones and POV here. Romantic atmosphere in this very well composed picture.
TFS and all the best
Aires

Hi Jean,
What a great POV with a boat and the setting sun. Very well captured and fantastic atmosphere. Well done my dear friend...
All the best...
Ali Rıza

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  • JCG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2875 W: 343 N: 3998] (14412)
  • [2008-05-14 0:37]

Hi Jean Paul,

I like much the pink colour of the sun which is detached from this gilded environment. Still a beautiful poetic image. The swell gives a pretty dynamics to this marine landscape. One moment of calm very pleasant, thank you Jean Paul.

With all my friendships and with soon,

Jean-Charles

Hi Jean Paul,
Beautiful minimalist composition of the sea and the boat with the light and the colors of the sunset, very soft, silky and agreeable.
I like much the luminosity and the tones so special that you have obtained in this photo.
It's a great work, I like.
Friendly regards,
Josep
Thanks by your nice words on your comments to my last post.

Sunset and a small boat....
What a romantic shot and i love the athmosphere you brought here...
Maybe the weather not in the best but the composition is very well, thanks Jean :-)

daniel

Hello Jean Paul,

This image is very nice because of the feeling of peace it inspires. The view is beautiful with the little boat nicely placed near the sun. Both elements combine very well to ceate a soothing perspective of this moment and place. Thanks JP.

Roberto

Hello JP,
Striking simplicity!
Wonderful colours!
I can feel the heath...
Greetings,
Pablo -

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