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Heaven
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Copyright: Mayank Kapoor (kullumayank) (8)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10-25
Categories: Nature
Camera: Pentax Optio 750Z
Exposure: f/7.8, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-06 1:53
Viewed: 420
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Picture taken on the way to Bijli Mahadev Temple.
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  • Doude (24)
  • [2008-05-06 8:51]
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Not bad, but it could be possible to do better if the tree was on the first left third, with including the big cloud on the two second third!
Try to use a smallest exposition, if it is available on your cam!
I hope you will understand my opinion!

Mayank :) there is a guideline called the rule of thirds. It is something painters have done for hundreds of years and photographers have adopted. This guideline says that the picture is divided into 9 equal sections (3x3). Then the main subject should be on a one third line, the horizon on another etc etc. This helps with the composition of the photo and increases a viewers enjoyment - guidelines can be broken,but as a rule try not to. I suggest you browse trek earth and look for the rule of thirds in other's photos and see how they applied it then try it out for your self.
remember to give up is to fail - keep posting and i promise you'll do better and better - 2 points for encouragement :) mark

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