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Copyright: carlos martos (cmartos) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1589 W: 71 N: 559] (6086)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-27
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation
Camera: Minolta DiMAGE A2, 28mm-200mm F2.8-F3.5
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Subway stations! [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-09-03 3:56
Viewed: 1008
Points: 40
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A simple picture of the Flon underground station. This is just under the bonzaïs. I tried to combine some elements, perspective, motion blur, boys and a particular lighting. The WB was set to flood, resulting in this mix of light source, as daylight comes in from a top window, not visible here.

Tech: slight crop top and bottom + usm.

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Un festival en bleu, j'aime beaucoup !
La compo est bien équilibrée et le flou du métro maîtrisé juste ce qu'il faut.
Belle image.

Hi Carlos!
This is a great shot. I love those cold, blueish tones here. And composition is nice to.
Different but definetely not worse work from you today...
All the best!

No!!you must be wait:)

Very dynamic,Light & shadows & all techniques for freezing it in a great way controlled ,Well done,Carlos,and I like a blue(ish) atmosphere here,nicely worked,With a fine POV.Great composition,Too.
Thanks for posting

L'ensemble est très réussie : la tonalité générale bleutée convient bien à ce lieu, la courbe accentuée par le deux bandes blanches au sol donne un bel effet, le mouvement traduit par le flou du métro ... un univers froid et austère, peut être mais il ya aussi de la vie avec les jeunes à droite.
Bravo Carlos, une excellente réalisation !

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  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5484 W: 506 N: 7209] (32731)
  • [2004-09-03 4:34]

Fine 'daily life' scene Carlos. Effectful light and good movement by the train. Well done..

Hi Carlos, fine composition of different light sources, very strong colors, and good timing - the train is captured just right!

Superbe photo Carlos avec de belles couleurs à dominante bleues.
J'aime beaucoup l'effet donné par le train.

I like the contrast between the moving subway and the stopped kids. Good framing and light. If the front of the subway wasn't seen the photo would gain in dinamic.

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  • Joker Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 81 W: 25 N: 81] (312)
  • [2004-09-03 6:35]

Very nice idea about WB. The whole scene is greatly lit from the top and this cold hue adds depth and significance, to my mind. The crop is just great. Superb creative shot.

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12520 W: 269 N: 16548] (66166)
  • [2004-09-03 7:29]

The blue tones are great here Carlos, very nice depth and clear and sharp. Well done!

Ah le L-O , la ficelle .. juste une question les rames vont-elles changer d'aspect quand le tube sera prolongé ? ou cela restera-t-il un funiculaire à cremaillère ? ( cas actuel )

Proposition : faire un petit commentaire sur l'origine du nom: la ficelle ..

Great capture, Carlos! I like the deep and curved composition and all the blue and grey tones. The WB settings give a very nice twist to the scene and the motion blurred train and the kids with their BMXs add a very nice & lively accent. Great job, congrats!

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  • Spoony Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1205 W: 22 N: 583] (3535)
  • [2004-09-03 11:22]

Great moment.... your capture is simple but with lots of criation!
Well done.

Very good shot, Carlos, I enjoy how you're trying out some different subjects and styles lately ;-) This one has a pretty dynamic look, from the motion blur of the train and the way in which the light is rendered after your playing with the WB settings. The curve towards the dark background builds a fine perspective, well done.

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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 350 W: 78 N: 378] (1053)
  • [2004-09-03 16:32]

Excelente composicion Carlos.
Lástima que no informes los valores de exposición de la misma.
Excelente nitidez, gran colorido y perspectiva.
Oportuna y bella imagen.

Excellent composition Carlos.
Pity that noninformation the values of exposure of the same one.
Excellent clearness, great colorful and perspective.
Opportune and beautiful image.

Une excellente composition Carlos, vous avez su capter le bon moment pour valoriser l'ensemble. Les couleurs sont parfaites avec une dominante bleue.
Du très bon travail Carlos.
Bravo !
An excellent composition Carlos, you knew how to get the good moment to value the group. Colours are perfected with a blue dominant.
Of the very good work Carlos.
Bravo!

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8695 W: 917 N: 11528] (55905)
  • [2004-09-04 2:51]

I like the slight blur of the train.

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  • hdl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1800 W: 13 N: 1518] (6190)
  • [2004-09-04 6:21]

You say that this is a simple picture? In my opinion, this is not so simple... You succeeded very well in combining the elements you wanted. Nice picture.

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  • dolin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2627 W: 447 N: 1494] (15647)
  • [2005-02-15 14:21]

encore une très belle photo.
excellenete prise de vue, belle exposition, joli mouvement du metro et superbes couleurs.
bravo
fred

une image que j'avais raté.. Superbe scéne.. J'adore. je ne sais pas qu'il y avait un métro à lausanne.. où est-ce un train ?
j'aime bien ce bleu à droite.. et le léger flou dans le train

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