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ErikSven (270) 2008-03-07 10:40

Hello Argyris,
I like the concept of this photo: much empty space in which people look SO small. The minimalism of your composition underlines this mood, but still I think it could be stronger. I'd suggest you to simplify this photo still more, by cropping the upper part. I also think it is a pity the colours look a bit washed out. This could be resolved by enhancing saturation and contrast, or by doing a black-and-white conversion. B&W fits with the minimalistic approach of your picture.
Just my personal opinion, of course. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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jorgi (3804) 2008-03-08 12:01

Hi Argy,

myself I quite like this one. Maybe it is a little overexposed but that happens to me very quickly when dealing with strong light. However I love the composition you created with chosen motive. This different solid surfaces of yellow, gray and white with just small intervention of three human figures an a sign above make great graphical impact. Excellent observing!

Kind regards,
Jeri

Didi (36516) 2008-07-06 11:56

Hello Argyris
The subject is very intersting but I think that you should underexpose a little bit.
Best regards