old church

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• Wandering_Dan (3099)
• [2008-02-21 10:20]
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Hello, Alex, welcome to TE!

First off, you meed to post a note, and some info about the exposure data and any post-processing would also be helpful. TE is mainly a learning site; people come here to learn how other people do things and what other people think is useful. Many people here will not critique a photo without some note.

Now, about this photo: It's an interesting concept, but the colors look false. (A note would explain why the colors are this way.) Also, there is a slight tilt to the church,and the tree, which is off-putting, and which could be easily corrected. Finally, there's that spurt of light on the right which looks out of place, since we have no idea what its source is.

Hope this helps.
Dan

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• anurts (218)
• [2008-02-21 18:35]

This is an interesting photo. Without a note it causes one to think what the author did to accomplish the photo. I think he used a tripod and a shutter speed of about 1 second. He signaled an assistant to flash a bright lite at the same time as he released the shutter, He then overexposed the result in his computer "darkroom". The lightsource on his right was turned just a tad too much in his direction giving the ray effect off the cameras' lens, the only flaw in his ARTWORK.
Thanks for the unusual shot, I like it

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• kri54 (1353)
• [2008-03-02 0:53]

jolie vue mais le traitement informatique est un peu trop poussé

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• bakyy (489)
• [2008-03-09 14:02]
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