Photographer’s Note
Carlo Catani, an Italian immigrant to Australia back in 1876, was held in very high regard by the people of Melbourne, and St. Kilda, where he lived and worked as a Civil Engineer until his death in 1918.
He did a lot of work on the Yarra River and other locations in Melbourne and after 1914 when he and his family moved to St. Kilda he got involved with the reclamation of the foreshore of St. Kilda. He designed the landscaping of the Catani Gardens, since named in his honour.
The Catani Memorial Clock Tower, shown in this shot is a major landmark of the St. Kilda area, being quite prominent on The Esplanade, close to the Gardens and beach. Catani had suggested a clock tower on the foreshore and after his death in 1918 a fund raising campaign was launched so that a suitable memorial to him could be built on the old rotunda site on the Esplanade. The tower was designed in 1930 and competed in 1932.
Much of this from: http://www.skhs.org.au/~SKHSarticles1/articles/Carlo_Catani.html and http://www.aussieheritage.com.au/listings/vic/St%20Kilda/CataniMemorialClockTower/15191
This is a very prominent feature in St. Kilda. I saw it and took a few shots of it the first day I was wandering around there. I then came back a couple of days later for a few more. I liked the composition of this one more than the others, with the balance between the tower and the palms, and the sloping walkway and brush as a bottom frame. With this angle I was able to crop out offending branches, power lines, tents from the Esplanade Flea Market, etc.
The biggest problem I had with this one was with distortion error. The tower was not perpendicular to the water on the right. To correct I tried the lens distortion tool, with little success, then I played around a bit with the crop with perspective tool, with more enjoyable results. Great tool, it turned what I considered a disaster into a decent shot.
A different point of view (from below) can be seen in the workshop.
Workflow for this shot was as follows:
Shot was taken in Raw, with a jpeg for reference (ISO 400 82 mm @f/11, 1/750)
NEF file adjusted for exposure, shadow and vignetting
Cropped with perspective
Levels – ran in auto, then tweeked for colour
Adjusted curves –for contrast
Added an overlay layer and dodged and burned with 5-20% opacity black and white brush
Added saturation layer +15 to master
Added Colour Balance Layer and selected on and tweeked sky, to better match my original memory
Saved as a tiff
Cropped, resized, reduced noise on sky selection, added a layer, inversed selection, sharpened with USM, modified sharpening with a layer mask (30-80% opacity black brush), framed and saved as a jpeg.
mvdisco, MLINES, Dyerco, skippy007, Matthew-Watt, wishlist, pierrefonds has marked this note useful
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Dyerco
(8854) 2008-02-14 21:15
Hi John
Well composed with the clock tower off to the right. Very nice exposure and excellent PP.
Phil
skippy007
(6799) 2008-02-14 21:21
Hi John,
I know that area well I live about 10 Km. north of Melbourne. I enjoyed reading your informative note on Signor Cattani and his work around St. Kilda, I also read with interest your effort in achieving this postcard quality result.
Thank you
Regards
Santo
Matthew-Watt
(4463) 2008-02-15 1:49
Hi John,
Well done, I don' think I have seen this tower before so thank you for teaching me something about it. You are correct; the palms do help to balance the tower effectively. Wonderful use of the WS tool to help eliminate the distortion, I have used it now on a couple of my skyline photos since a TE member (may have been you I think) told me about it. It works brilliantly and the difference is staggering. I don’t think that the lighting on this occasion was the absolute best but you have certainly strived to make the most of it. I like the clear representation of the finer details on the clock face and tower.
Matt
wishlist
(4133) 2008-02-15 3:33
Hi John,
the excellent pov aloowed you to deliver a very clean and clear picture, with the clock tower well standing against the sky and well positioned off center. Colour range look well balanced while the quality is excellent throughout with well visible details.
Thanks for sharing it!
Cheers
Igor
pierrefonds
(25915) 2008-02-15 5:19
Hi John,
An informative note, a nice image of the Catani memorial clock tower, the point of view is showing with precision the details and colors of the architecture of the tower and of the surrounding. The photo is receiving a good luminosity which brings out the colors. Well done, have a nice day.
Pierre
trekks
(14260) 2008-02-15 8:39
Hi John
Having the diagonal FG to isolate the clock tower is interesting approach for this pov. I wonder how it will look like to show the tower fully with its base and any other features below to highlight?
TFS, bill
swavek
(127) 2008-02-15 11:14
hey John, the picture is... boring! don't understand the composition, the fenece doesn't match to the tower at all. what i like about the photo is quality of it, especially the tower. you've done good job to get the details of that, the bricks, the clock, really, really clear! good note, too.
take care
ribeiroantonio
(21739) 2008-02-15 13:42
Is the tower near the proposed re-development of the St. Kilda foreshore? I saw a not very nice council meeting the other day on the news. It is a very nice piece of Italian style architecture. Well done.
Antonio
MLINES
(10842) 2008-02-15 14:08
Hi John, Well cropped and balanced photo of this historical structure. By not including some of the less attractive surroundings near there it makes for a very good image. The palms are very benefitial. TFS. Murray.
mvdisco
(11346) 2008-02-15 22:10
Bonsoir John
Belle prise de vue and well taken picture of this memorial clock tower, Excellent POV and composition, with nice colors lovely note and details. very well done.
Michel
pablominto
(39918) 2008-02-21 3:20
Hello John,
Interesting lines in this frame!
The composition is well balanced and has sharp fine details, both in vegetation and architecture...
Good angle of light adds 3-D feeling to the tower, and I read the note with interest!
Greetings,
Pablo -
Greg1949
(8507) 2008-02-22 5:52
John, I have had but one trip to Oz and am grateful that you and the others here on TE are showing me what I missed. It is so huge that I suppose I would have to go there for years to get a good grasp of the majesty of the place but these photos do help a lot. Nice color and detail and a fine note.
Greg
Photo Information
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Copyright: John Plumb (JPlumb)
(3153) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-10-21
- Categories: Architecture, Artwork
- Camera: Nikon D200, Nikkor 18-200mm 3.5-5.6 G ED AF-S VR, Sigma EX Wide Circular PL 72mm
- Exposure: f/11, 1/750 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2008-02-14 20:05
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