the_pine_Tree_and_the_clouds

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• Vasa (4027)
• [2008-02-07 16:37]

Nice shot, Suzi, in the decisiv moment. Step by step, your garden will be very known in the world. With the fidelity to your work, best regards...Branko

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• Wahclellaspirit (2588)
• [2008-02-07 22:44]

Hello Zsu,
I like the sky and the tree, but I have a suggestion-- when most people read a book they start on the left and move right, and as this is more comfortable and comforting to a reader it is alike that to a viewer of photography. There are no rules in photography, and one item in art is never be afraid to paint off the canvas. This means you could have placed the tree on the far right and allowed the lower branch to fall out of the scene, at least part of it anyway. The tree being placed on the far right edge would have kept the viewer from falling oput of the image and would have kept them locked within the borders of the scene.
The exposure is excellent in the scene, try placing the tree as I think it would work the best and let's see how it appears.
Trees are always a welcoming sight...
Steve

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• jalab_temen (718)
• [2008-02-08 1:43]

Dear Zsuza, you are a real sky and silhouette specialist. This photo also approves this fact, many thx for sharing, Jalab

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• temmel (2340)
• [2008-02-08 4:52]

Szia Zsú,
megint egy csodás naplementét láthatunk tőled!!
Varázslatos színek!
Szép fényeket , színeket! :)
Linda

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• lousat (4180)
• [2008-02-08 14:07]

Hi Susy,a great idea the tree in the middle at a fantastic sky,great work,thanks for share,Luciano

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• Silvio1953 (22736)
• [2008-02-09 1:47]

Hi Zsu, fascinating composition with lovely silhouette, wonderful light and warm sunset colors, splendid sky, very well done, have a great week end, ciao Silvio

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• Jakab (1537)
• [2008-02-10 12:28]

Szia Zsuzsa!
Jól belejöttél ezekbe a sziluettes naplementés képekbe! Szépen érvényesülnek a felhők különös árnyalatai, a fa meg kell a térérzethez is. Egyébként egyetértek Steve-vel, szerencsésebb a sziluettet a képő széléhez közelebb vinni, végtére is nem ő itt a főszereplő. Azért tetszik!
Üdv
Laci

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• paprika-jancsi (1213)
• [2008-02-22 12:56]

This takes after a famous Canadian painter of the Group of Seven, Tom Thompson who disappeared in the Northern Ontario wilderness.
Your photo is powerful! Nagyon szep. Jancsi

(PS This is a spruce tree Zsuzsikam :))