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A stare to heaven


A stare to heaven
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Copyright: Mahmut Sami ELMACI (edifice) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 79 W: 3 N: 51] (265)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-01
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/8, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-01-19 12:53
Viewed: 458
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
"Şehadet parmağıdır göğe doğru minare
Her nakışta o mânâ, öleceğiz ne çare.."
Necip Fazıl

Sultanahmed Camiinin penceresinden, ön minaresinin görünümü..

"a view of sultanahmed mosque's minaret" I use this window as a natural frame.
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To Wandering_Dan: Hello Wandering Danedifice 1 01-20 01:46
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Hello, Mahmut, welcome to TE!

You had a nice idea here, but it needs some work. You have too much black in the picture, and it's titled oddly. Plus it's not really sharp. I did a workshop to give you some ideas how to deal with these problems - though the tilt really couldn't be corrected in this case; that had to be done in the original shooting.

Also, we need a note. Many people will not comment on a picture here if there is no note.

Regards,
Dan

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  • muraks Gold Star Critiquer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 4] (312)
  • [2008-01-31 15:22]
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Merhaba Mahmut bey,
Necip fazıl'ı ingilizce tercüme etmek kuvveti bizde olsa gerçekten iyi olacaktı.
kompozisyonla paralel giden bir çalışma.
tebrik ederim.
Murat

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