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The Baltic Sea
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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Adrian Perek (muadibe)
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| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2007-08-24 |
| Categories: Nature |
| Camera: Konica Minolta DiMAGE E40 |
| Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2007-12-29 18:17 |
| Viewed: 488 |
| Points: 5 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| Picture shows a small path connecting two seacoast town (Trzesacz and Rewal) |
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What a glorious wild shot this is! Great use of light here. The only *slight* distraction is in the way the horizon on the left cuts the photo in half. The clouds on the right are fabulous!
Hello Adrian,
This part of the Polish coastline is very appealing and I am pleased you have taken this photo of it. I think you need to improve a few things fires however: The horizon is level and balanced, but it almost cuts the photo into two equal portions. It is far more effective to have the horizon lower in the frame, but in this instance, more FG and less sky would be good. In the sky, the colours are a little too much saturated, because some are taking on a bit of a green tinge. You also MUST include a note because this will help the viewers of the photo to appreciate the scene more and learn about the location. The colours are varied and combined in a beautiful manner, and the pathway captures the eye, so overall I finish up enjoying the photograph. Good luck, I look forward to seeing more from you and this part of the world.
Matt
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Happy 2008 to you, Adrian!
Happy 2008 to you, Dipankar!
Welcome to TE community, pleaes read FAQ, Guidelines to help you in many ways here.
Very good colorful shot of landscape and it is a well thought-of capture for this composition and exposure. You have obviously been attracted like me by the warm light falling on the grass field, forming a great FG color contrast to the coastline. Framing the trees/bushes at right is a wise choice! and including the dirt road is even a better skill!
I agree with Matt on the horizon at centerline, although it is no hard-rule but it may give more pleasing effect, try it.
Overall, I quite like your mood here, it is refreshing to look at this view, and you tried well in capturing the actual landscape onto this digital view. Great work. TFS
bill
nice colour and composition.
nadir
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